Dear Diary,
I was real sad today. Them boys in the bunkhouse took my dog and shot him dead. I guess it's what's best for him, but I sure will miss him a ton. I have had him since he was just a little puppy. The boys been complaining because the old dog is smelly and stinks up the whole room. Hopefully the old thing will be put out of it's pain.I was so sad when they took him away I just laid down on my bunk and stared at the wall for a while. When that dog was younger he was the best sheepdog you ever saw. The best, and I am going to miss him so much. We used to have so much fun when he was just a little pup. I brightened a little when Slim said I could have any of his puppies.
I was lying on my bed listening to the two new boys the real big guy and the small fellow talk when they started a conversation about how they plan on going of and buying there own little ranch when they get enough money. I started thinking about how nice that sounds, when I realized that if us three guys pooled all our money together we could get there super fast. I have a lot of money stored away anyway, so I asked them how that sounded. They were a little resistant at first but once we talked out all the details it was basically a done deal. I am very excited this sure will make my old life a lot better.
I like how you actually sounded like candy,
ReplyDeletei like your paragraphs lengths not to short and not to long,
and maybe if you went a little more into detail that would be great!